ClockworkOri's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[When Does He Arrive?]

For your first animation it wasn't terrible, I would suggest not having the text take up so much of the video, as it's not needed, and takes away from the quality a bit. I would also say work a bit on anatomy, but overall for your first animation it could be a lot worse. so congrates on your first animation let's see if you improve from here.

JessieYun responds:

Hi, ClockworkOri!

Thank you very much for the comment and advice! And I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I'm new to this animating thing so I'm trying to learn more! I'll keep your notes in mind. Thank you!

[There she is!!!]

I have seen this short quite a few times, and each time I can't help, but just love it. The song accompanying it is so catchy, the animation is quite well done for 2004. I hope the creator has gone on to do some cool stuff.