For your first animation it wasn't terrible, I would suggest not having the text take up so much of the video, as it's not needed, and takes away from the quality a bit. I would also say work a bit on anatomy, but overall for your first animation it could be a lot worse. so congrates on your first animation let's see if you improve from here.

I have seen this short quite a few times, and each time I can't help, but just love it. The song accompanying it is so catchy, the animation is quite well done for 2004. I hope the creator has gone on to do some cool stuff.